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And after about 2-3 months I finally finish my much awaited collaboration with :icondannyboy1994: called Ice Blue Blood.

Ice Blue BloodThe frosty biting current
Of gust whiffs
Frozen
If only for a while, I pile blankets on my frozen frame,
which cannot keep out the cold from within
The blazing heat that was your love has gone,
My heart has frozen over,
Hell my veins freeze as the heat slowly leaves them,
Trailing down my wrist
I cannot feel my heart,
So cold
It is numb.
As I hum the song our love that we wrote,
I wonder if you sing it too
Or are you off, singing anew to her as well
Bruising the piece of my heart, with you.
Loving you was an adventure, a ride,
but to think of it now, sends a chill through my spine
Your love was my high, but now you tell me good bye
An iced goodbye, frosted, as cold as your soul
In the frozen landscape of our love
I try to set you free, my white dove
Your gaze now leaves the windows of my soul cold
In this white snow, I'm black as charred coal
Bronchi of my lung pump the smoke of our love
the valves of my heart pump the liquor of our love
I close my eyes and I see you, how drunk and dyl


Ice Blue Blood is about the pain one faces while separation. When you are pulled away from your loved one from circumstances you can't control and because of the fault that is not yours, but theirs. It talks about the love, hate, desperation, blindness, lust, the very essence of love in all it's colours, just icy. 

Love is always associated with red, but here we have linked it to "Ice Blue", how separation leaves you in an icy cold pit that sends chills down your spine.

Do check the piece out :)

Daniel has been cooperative and has an endless flow of ideas and amazing lines. He is a great writer himself. I read his stuff occidentally on his birthday and I really wanted to collaborate. He was new to all of this but did agree and we produced this piece together finally.

Daniels style of writing is not very different from mine. He writes it more freely, without boundaries, stanza classifications, technicalities. Daniels metaphors and comparisons are beautiful and I love his ability to say a lot of things in just one line.

I look forward on doing more pieces with him.

Do check the piece out and tell me how you like it. :D

Kartik ♥

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Kartik
Artist | Student | Varied
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I am a 18 year old school student. I like to write, sculpt, draw and be an admirer to beautiful art. I love making new friends, no matter what you are, what you prefer or you look like. :)
I love art, nature and appreciating every little bit. Packed up with a lot of positivity and lame jokes, I am also a music lover. I like talking a lot! I like celebrating each moment in life. :D You're never young twice x]
Hope we can be good friends.
You can always note me if you want to talk, I am willing to make new friends no matter where they are x]
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Thanks for the fave.
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kartiksharma 3 hours ago  Student General Artist
Most welcome! :D
Keep posting and keep inspiring ♥
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Hollee-McNamara 2 days ago   Photographer
Thankyou very much for :+fav:ing :rose:                                                         Flux by Hollee-McNamara
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kartiksharma 1 day ago  Student General Artist
Most welcome! :D (Big Grin)
Keep posting and keep inspiring ♥
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Many thanks Kartik for adding "Hewn from Stone" fav.me/d64iyos to your favourites. It is very much appreciated. :-) :w00t:
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kartiksharma 1 day ago  Student General Artist
Most welcome! :D (Big Grin)
Keep posting and keep inspiring ♥
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kartiksharma 1 day ago  Student General Artist
hahahahahahaha sweet
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Hermetic-Wings 1 day ago  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug::hug::hug;
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MarcosRodriguez 4 days ago  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi!!! :wave: Thank you so much for the :+devwatch:!!! :hug:
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