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As a bud I saw,
How you tackled all flowers,
You saw the best,
Let dry the rest.

I thought, I pledged,
I planned as I dreamt,
That I will be special,
No one except me you see in this gravel.

So I developed all 7 colours of rainbow,
In my petals, To show the love I have,
Red for love, blue for clearness, green for lushness,
Orange for sunset romance, yellow for shine, violet and indigo for depthness.

And the next day I stood proud,
But you hunted somewhere else,
Never came, didn't even see,
From the dump of normals who shown the most was me!

I thought, I pledged,
I planned as I dreamt,
That I will be special,
No one except me you'll see.

So I sent for the best of fragrances,
Rose, marigold, sunflower, lavender,
Bluebells, indigo and of the leaves,
Hope had risen with them you'll see me, bee of bees.

And with my chest out,
I glanced at you,
You didn't come for the fragrances,
You didn't even see colourful fragrance faces.

As I rot,
You saw a small pot,
That had me in it,
You came close and sit.

Tried, but no,
It's too late or so,
You went like a fizz,
Went without a thought or hiss.

And as I sit here and cry,
For why I did even try,
There were others so many,
Beetles, Bumbles and Butterfly.

You were the bee,
The bee of my life,
But you never bothered to see,
Never flew by me.

They say its a loss for her,
As I sob,
But my petals dry,
As she lay in someone elses armed petals.
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~bottpaint Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pain is just weakness leaving your body =)
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Mood: Love ~kartiksharma Mar 31, 2012  Student General Artist
exactly x)
Thanks for the comment :)
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A great poem! :)
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Mood: Love ~kartiksharma Mar 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much :)
Your comment is well appreciated :D
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~CelticRavyn Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is incredible. Very powerful.
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Mood: Love ~kartiksharma Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank You so much :)
It's great to hear you liked it :)
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*HoudaShams Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
powerful poem
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Mood: Love ~kartiksharma Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh thank you so much :)
I'm glad you believe so ^_^ ♥
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*HoudaShams Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are very welcome :D
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Mood: Love ~kartiksharma Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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